Sunday, May 14, 2006

THE DAGGER-Poem

(A PICTURE OF MAVILIN)


Me
Weak
And empty
Fucked
Me
Us
We
All
Pick
Up our Daggers
With hatred in our souls; in our
Torchered and polluted minds
Nothing else matters
We'll fight
We'll strive
We'll fight
While alive
We will kill
We will lose
We will steal
We've chosen
To either kill
Or to suicide
Which 1 will
You decide!
You'll still
Be here
To kill
Even
I

28 Comments:

Blogger MAVILIN said...

Not yet my dear. I'm not finished the blog.

5:41 PM  
Blogger Paul said...

how tedious

7:08 PM  
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12:46 PM  
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6:16 AM  
Blogger MAVILIN said...

aw mel..such flattery

7:03 PM  
Blogger MAVILIN said...

btw guys...notice "with hatred within our souls". With hate in our souls...we will kill....

1:16 AM  
Blogger MAVILIN said...

we will kill both spiritually and phisycally, but i'm refering more spritualy.....usually my poems are like that.

12:35 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

things i noticed...

'we will CHOSE' ?!?!?!?!
'or to SUICIDE' !!?!?!?!
'Which 1 will you decide!' ?!?!?!

okay so i guess you had to mispell choose in order to keep the shape.. and i guess the same with 'to suicide' instead of to commit it... but why did you put the exclamation mark instead of the question mark?!?!

2:14 AM  
Blogger MAVILIN said...

Okay lord, you can be my spelling program for Mavilin 2. heh, why not?

I have to admit, "chose" IS spelt wrong... I guess my spirit helper didn't see that too! damnit...

I don't see anything wrong with "to suicide"..cuz it was ment to be...

And about the ! mark, you can cut out the "which one will" and just leave "you decide!" but even with the whole sentence , it does make sense because i'm making more of a statement,than a question.

3:58 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

its cool how u made the poem look like a dagger..i like it :D

5:47 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

one does not "suicide" one mus COMMIT suicide..

1:14 PM  
Blogger MAVILIN said...

Heh Lord, it does make sense. hmm.

1:00 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

don't be dumb...it had to rhyme. heh :p

4:25 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

you're fucked up, dude

5:10 AM  
Blogger MAVILIN said...

well thank you anonymous. Thanks for letting us know that you are too... gby!

2:10 PM  
Blogger MAVILIN said...

There. my spirit helper helped me fix up my poem. now it's fine..

5:38 AM  
Blogger Klaire said...

very abstract, very cool. I love it

12:26 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

eat shit, pussy!
you're a crap poet.
deal with it.

11:28 PM  
Blogger MAVILIN said...

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9:52 AM  
Blogger MAVILIN said...

I'll eat shit and say i'm a crap poet if i see urs better than mine......

9:53 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Seriously Mav? That's pretty nasty...

1:11 AM  
Blogger MAVILIN said...

Yeah, depends what kind of shit though...

11:02 AM  

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